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The Redemption of Peter Wentz (3/?)

No one could’ve anticipated how out of control this situation was becoming, but some were expected to be pleased with it.

William had him.
Wrapped around his finger.
Just as he had wanted for as long as he had layed eyes on him.

If a passing vagrant were to set eyes on Peter Wentz at this moment, shocked would be a massive understatement. It was a far cry from what he was months ago. He had empathy, compassion, and humanity then. That was nonexistent now, replaced with a thirst for carnal pleasures so severe it would make a black hole cry. If you were to look into his eyes, limitless pits of noir would trap you in a mindless gaze until he got what he wanted from you. Pete was murderous now and living up to every meaning of a bloodthirsty predator.

And he was loving every minute of it.

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legosarecool
Nov. 16th, 2010 08:54 pm (UTC)
"limitless pits of noir..." awesome. just freaking awesome.
shortest chapter ever, but sweet none-the-less.
evil!pete is down right sexy and disturbing. and what's this with William? dun, dun, dun.
I can't wait for the next update!
keep up the awesome, stupendous, etc. work!
crave_summerlin
Nov. 16th, 2010 10:19 pm (UTC)
Thanks for commenting again. I have this brilliant plan in my head that will move things along shortly. The epiphany should come any day now, and the newest update will be here soon.
legosarecool
Nov. 17th, 2010 04:13 am (UTC)
lol, sounds good.
i'll be waiting on the edge of my metaphorical seat :)
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